the dots are too visible...the render is cool, and i can't read the quote... 7/10 I rated the one you posted, not the one you're using
1st.. Like the concept, but the render, still needs some work imo. Also it seems that its a bit too plain. 2nd.. Really like the bg, but the sprite is overcontrasted.. fix that :lol: also, the text on second is a bit hard to read...