I think its a really small large peice. Work on the lighting and the text. And just add more to the peice.
theres nothing more i can do...im still thinking...i know the idea is good but the execution is bad...uploading 2nd version....BTW .08 i like ur idea and im trying it... EDIT: im trying the best i can to remove the lighting but i cant...erased some layers and they still appear...>.<