um...the brushing is overdone, covers up the render takes away the effect...the tag itself overall is poorly done..no offense, the focal point is directed to the text and i really believe that text is an unimportant part of the tag..concentrate more on making the stock the center of focal attention...it's too blurry as well 4/10
i dont like the dotted borders..the render in the first needs to be a tad more blended the bg is interesting i dont think the text works 5/10 the second one, the stock looks sharpened, bad quality...render needs to blended...and i just dont like the bg.. 5/10