My Second Render

i think i have got a lot better since last time so here it is
original
http://www.wallcoo.com/game/hl2wallpapers/...e_2_08_1280.jpg
rendered:
http://teamobliteration.co.uk/my-render-2.png
On black:
http://teamobliteration.co.uk/my-render-2.5.png
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woot my hosting sorry i should post my first maybe later hope you like also i am new to this forums so hello
update: with a new render a halo one this time
original
rendered:

 

It's not bad.. I really like and really good job for your 2nd render. Good job

 

thanks

 

gj espicaly for 2nd render

 

update with a new render

 

not bad good for a second !!!

 

looks great, good job on #2

 

Great job. You're a Halo fan?

 

VERY well done.