My First Render.

Sorry guys for being such a newb to this, but i decided to give rendering a try. I completly understand how hard it is, and all of you renderers out there have my respect.

I hope you like it, i would like to start rendering sometime in the the near future, this is my first. So expect it to be bad. I'm still waiting for the real pros out there to render my request in THIS THREAD. So till then, here's my shot.

Be warned, its huge....just click the thumbnail to see the full version:



Tell me what needs improving and how, cause i'm a complete newb ;(

 

bit choppy try getting rid of the white outline

 

How do i do that?

 

what tool are you using for it? try using pen tool and try to find easyer wallpapers for rendering,but nice try!

 

oh nice render love it more

 

hmm, bad quality picture and damnnn it's choppy

try to use the pentool (set it on 'paths'), and than you feather it = nicer effect

 

uhh...bad quality
nice picture though...

 

like the other said, very bad quailty of the pic. Cut is alright i guess. i suggest you use the pen tool next time it give some nice outcomes

 

Thanks everyone, I did use the pentool, then i used the lasso tool for the hair...and i did feather it at first, then i went back to get rid of the white outline and it became choppy again.