2nd Render

Hey guys, Joined yesterday and started rendering yesterday. Im now onto my second render.. what do you guys think?

Origional


Render


Hints on how to get better or any comment would be appreciated

Thanks, Bye

 

gj gj for sure, very good job even for 2nd render
i wont use it tho, not my style
but gd gd

 

ok nice dude very nice job on that might use it keep it up just 1 thing slight line round out side in places but for second render its awsom

 

Very nice Cowboy Bebop render

 

not bad man

gj, keep it uip

 

You are gettim better keep at it

 

-PG- and yea u r getting better

 

not really useable because of the bottom of the render but for your 2nd not too bad.