1st Render (new Guy)

Hey this is my first ever render, comments appreciated!!

Origional:


Render


Comments

Thanks

 

its good but its a bit choppy in the top, and theres a bit of white on the bottom other than that its good

 

not bad! love the car!

 

The render worked out quite well, to bad you can still see the trees through the rear window.

 

Its preety good and im new to this site aswell
so WELCOME

 

hehe thanks guys, If anyone has any tips on how to get better at rendering it would be greatly appreciated, Also could someone teach my how to use the pen tool cause i just cant get it to work Lol, Thanks for commenting.


Oh and befor i forget hwo would i remove the tree in the backgroudn without ruining the shine one the window if you know what i mean.



Thanks, Sutton

 

the render is a bit choppy but is still good thnx for sharing will cred if used...

 

lil choppy around the under-carriage, trees kinda ruin the render too but gj

 

A little choppy at the top of the car.
But really a good first try m8 keep it up.

BTW: shouldn't this be posted in non-gaming???

Grtzzz

 

Little bit choppy dude should be in non-gaming renders but hey ya new good cut for ya first to bud there a lot of tutorials about on how to render just got to get using that google or post 60 post on this forum and get all the best tuorials going as for the glass it can be tricky just a bit of cutting out the glass and background already there and then putting in your own glass effect windows you can find tutorials on that to .....

Cheers

GleZgaman

 

welcome to you, next time plz post your non gaming renders in the non gaming section :lol:

for the first render nice work i would say, keep it up!

 

good one but i think you can do better yeah????

 

Little choppy in some places ;/