[anime] Bass Girl

Hey People im new here and ive only really just started rendering.
im using adobe photoshop 7.0 so heres my first render.
orig

and heres the render:


i think its a little choppy myself but if you could give me advice that would be great

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15 veiws and no reply is it truely that bad? :blink:

 

very nice bro looks nice, good cut fairly clean too no sharp points

 

thanks Vrtx anyone else

 

15 views and no replies means people see the anime tag and hope for pr0n

Nice render.
Pretty clean, good job

 

I like it, i even made a sig with it

 

nice sig looks great and thanks for the comments so far ^_^

 

Oh boy,anime and bass guitars,the angels do love me so.....
It'll look great in a sig,thanks

 

looks nice man. ^_^

 

Wow thats my bass in anime form...awsome!