Elementalist

I only found one of these and it was pretty choppy. I'm sure there is another one in a pack somewhere but I made this as a request and I wanted something to show for it.

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really nice renders especially on the hair and the orb thing =)

 

nice cut man...dunno if i would use,but very good job.

 

very cool. very cool.

 

Great job on the glow, thats a reeal nice cut.

 

Very nice job!

 

Very nice man thanks a lot.

 

nice cut, gj on the glow.

 

Wow I expected a bunch of "Been done before" statements; thanks for your comments! ^_^

 

great job on the staffs and the orb. love your renders this one looks really good. keep up teh fabulous work (me<--cant wait to see more)

 

"Been done before"...

...joke

its really nice, i like it a lot ^_^

 

sweet cut, i like it alot

 

It's a nice cut as usual..

but the glow on the orb looks artificial.. usually when something glows, it's outline blends into the glow.. this however, looks like an orb on a glow - hence 2dimensional effect

Otherwise - its a sweet cut.

 

Try inner glow and make the spread on the outer glow a higher number, might make it look a little better. The glow needs to be "thicker" so that it matches the glow on her face . Also, the tips of her hair is redish and doesn't look right, which can easily be resolved by changing it to match the rest .

Other than that, it's a pretty sweet render. Awesome job on it man, kudos from me ^_^

 

Thank you and especially thanks to Saint and Shadow since they told me how I could improve as well.