^ 8.2/10- Good smudging and render. The font could use more work. Not really my style of smudging =P 8.0/10- Not bad smudge art.. just the right side is really empty and the text could have been elsewhere.
1 7/10 loks cool but not feling it 2 8/10 looking cool i like the effect 3 8/10 i like wats going on everything is nice
Top, render needs to be bigger text needs to be worked on, so does border and coloring. 3/10 read some tuts bottom, scanlines need to go or at least be faded. the rest is ok 5/10
so... it's too big for me, text looks bad and bg is not fit with render 3/10, sry please rate my current and these 2:
slayer 1st: 8/10 too dark imo, rest is good 2nd 9/10 but again, you need to improve lighting current: 8/.5/10 seems mono in a way...love the text though