schelprok's tut huh ? ^_^ ya, bg looks rly good but render and text ruins it 6.5/10 please rate my current and this one:
First: to dark and chaotic, brushing could be better. 6/10 second: Much better, I like the flow, colors and lighting, although the render is a bit hard to see. 7/10
pann first - 7/10 (no lighting and blending + text needs work) 2nd - 7.5/10 (if only for the typo) 3ed - 10/10 (great message)