My First Render [anime]

Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by Martini, Dec 28, 2005.

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  1. Dec 28, 2005 at 11:52 PM #1
    Martini

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    ::Render::
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    ::Origonal::
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    not sure how the render became smaller than the origonal. took me about 2 hours.

    Any thoughts?
     
  2. Dec 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM #2
    Intrastat

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    That's pretty good for your first ;)

    Sometimes, even though the original is like that, you might want to consider smoothing out the edges. Look at her thighs (in a truly professoinal manner, mind you). See how it's all choppy? Just make it a nice, lean curve and you're golden.
     
  3. Dec 29, 2005 at 12:16 AM #3
    Drnken

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    NICE Gundam Seed.. I Forget who it is.... lol whats her name again? xD
     
  4. Dec 29, 2005 at 12:43 AM #4
    Ayuri

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    Lacus Clyne.
    Its a good render!
     
  5. Dec 29, 2005 at 12:49 AM #5
    svelte86

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    I see a bit of a white outline, but a decent cut there.
     
  6. Dec 29, 2005 at 9:39 AM #6
    krejilien

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    nice work man, keep it up! :D
     
  7. Dec 29, 2005 at 12:34 PM #7
    Deathwing

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    Good work although it is slightly choppy
     
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