I don't like your first one dude (sorry) it just looks a bit too busy, its really hard to tell whats going on without looking at it for hours 6/10 Second one is less busy and easier on the eyes, but again its just not my thing, but it is good 7.5/10
looks pretty good, background is cool, ecerything is alright 8.5/10 background looks ok, but the render stinks on ice, text is cool tho 8/10