First Render (ragnarok)

Hello all heres my first render ever so be nice!.
i know the hair on the male character is a litle choppy, if you find anything else please tell me.
Thanks,
-Disturbed,
PS: if you do use it please rep me

original:

Render:

 

Hair is kinda choppy, but thats to be expected, especially for your first render and first time working with hair ^_^ other than that, a pretty nice render and I hope to see more from you

 

Thanks it was hard because the bits behind the hair were almost the same blend of colours witch stuffed me up alot, btw thanks for your comment.

 

Everything besides the hair is a nice cut. Gj for your 1st. Keep them coming.

 

kinda choppy here and there...but pretty good for a first....keep'em comin