first sig- already rated it. second sig- 2/10. Too simple and it looks more like you're begging then making a notice. hehe
leethal 1st 7/10 doesnt have much appeal and text looks weird and out of place... 2nd doesnt look much other than a couple of render slapped on a bg at different opacity 6/10
Psychodesignz 7.5/10(like the concept but maybe work on colours to make it more apppealing or something..