First Render Ever

Original:Gamewallpapers.com


Please bear in mind that this is my first ever attempt at rendering. I've never ventured far past the magic wand tool, until now.



EDIT: Ugh, I just noticed the outline when viewing it against the GR forums color <_< . Oh well, like I said, this is a first ever attempt, so please be honest, even if that means flaming me to a crisp that would even make Colonel Sanders jealous. ^_^

*hides in a corner*

 

Nice try for a first m8...
Little choppy and some outlining but remember that you get better with every render you do!
Keep em coming m8!!!

Grtzzz

 

Thanks for the comments SpitFire. I probably should've tried something like a car or something smoother for my first, but I guess I need to learn how to crawl before I can fly. ^_^

 

LoOoL yeah mostly it is easier to search for a image without 2 much stuff going on...
I remember that my first one was shadow in a bike, that was a hell also all that little stuff inside and outside...
Didn't really came out great either, if you wanna see my first render ever:
Shadow And Bike

But you have potential m8, keep at it!

Grtzzz

 

Cheers, mate!

Anyone else have any comments and/or suggestions?

 

Everything looks pretty nice. A little choppy here and there. Keep working and you'll become better. Gj

 

^_^ Thanks, Rebellion. I am going to try and have another go at it, and update the image accordingly, to document the progress.

I appreciate the comments thusfar.

 

pretty good minus the white glow on the right side

 

Nice job for your first render ^_^

As you can see on the GR background, there is a white glow... but thats not too bad, especially for your first time out. The hairs a little choppy looking too, but hair is difficult... or so I've heard... never worked with it yet, but I have one coming up

 

Yeah, very nice. Apart from the white/grey bit on the guys hair.

 

^_^

Thank you for the comments, everyone!

 

Pretty nice for your first render.

 

Thanks for the comment, iHog

 

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Looks nice, a little choppy, but nice.


Good luck on the next of your renders, I can't wait too see them