My First Render

Well.. this is my first render.. i liked it

tell me what isnt right yet

 

is it me or is there a picture there? dude link your picture with a image hoster

 

Nope, I don't see it either.

 

Refresh the page

 

a bit choppy good for your first and its good doubt i would use though dont lke HL2 renders

 

Not bad if its your first.

Just look for bigger stuff and be sure to save it as a png next time.

 

Ok, i'll think about it

Can anyone give me somthing to render?
So I can try.. i dont know where to find nice images to render

 

Yea.. can i have a pic to attempt to render pls?

 

for a first one its good.

 

i'd say that's a good first attempt

 

its ok for your first but work harder next time

 

For your next render, save it as a .png file on a transparent background.

 

Good for a first but a bit choppy. Thats half-life 2 right?

 

can't tell the size is too small, plus it looks extremely choppy, look at the tutorial in http://www.gamerenders.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=131832
click that and you can learn to render really well.

 

Thanks i'll use that tuto

Btw, i did another try here:

Second Render It was for somone in requests