2nd Try

Well, yesterday posted my first game render.

Here is my second try. Just wondering wat you think of it.

All comments are welcome, can only learn from it




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Grtz Remko

 

That looks realy good for your second try! (better then my first try)

 

thats good, a few stray dots and ive never seen this before.

 

wow, i think that is a perfect cut, although i wont use, EXCELLENT CUT.

 

nice never before seen
better then ur 1st

 

it all looks smooth, but i think his mouth kinda looks like a tad bit sharp

 

lol, wont use it for a sig, but nice job!

 

It's okay, but it's chopppy in some places. And there's some of the background at the bottom.
It's good for your second try, though.

 

...very odd render but you made a clean cut!

 

man that is cool
i wish my 2nd was that good
keep em coming

 

weirdish picture but a nice render (there is a line to the right of the axe though that wasn't erased)

 

Thnxs for all the comments, will continue making renders, realy like doing it

 

About the background part, i presume you mean the part between the legs.. that is a piece of his tale.

Grtz. Remko

 

nice render, i prob wont use thow