Kenshi: Blind Swordsman

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  1. Nov 28, 2005 at 1:19 AM #1
    CandleJack

    CandleJack Well-Known Member

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    This is my second render please be kind......

    Just some feedback plz.....he had like aura around his hand but i cut it out, as well as some of his feet.....

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  2. Nov 28, 2005 at 1:22 AM #2
    otto asine

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    it has some spots on his right hand (might not be too obvious to you guys, but im viewing it on a white background since stupid IE wont let me view it with the transparency), and overall the outline from his right shoulder pad downward could use some work, along with the outline on his left leg, but those are very, very minor mistakes. nice job overall.
     
  3. Nov 28, 2005 at 1:23 AM #3
    Drocan

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    Cool looking render, and a nice cut. I like the lighting on the character (even if you didn't do it)
     
  4. Nov 28, 2005 at 4:49 AM #4
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    Nice job cutting m8, though I have seen better cuts of this render...
    Keep rendering you will become better with every render!

    Grtzzz
     
  5. Nov 28, 2005 at 7:58 AM #5
    .homicide

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    kool render.......................
     
  6. Nov 28, 2005 at 8:05 AM #6
    akkarin

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    nice cut & nice pic

    its cool =) where do you find all these pictures? xD

    mfg akkarin

    may your swords stay sharp
     
  7. Nov 28, 2005 at 8:39 AM #7
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    nice cut i like it
     
  8. Nov 28, 2005 at 4:07 PM #8
    CandleJack

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    Thanks!! i migt try cutting the lightning and feet
     
  9. Nov 28, 2005 at 4:44 PM #9
    IdoNOTpawn

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    Good Job IMO, where is this from??
     
  10. Nov 28, 2005 at 5:04 PM #10
    snakebyte

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    a little choppy but overall good
     
  11. Nov 28, 2005 at 5:26 PM #11
    Rippa Mango

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    hair sucks
    body's good, a little choppy in parts
    overall, not all that bad
    but work on that hair :P
     
  12. Nov 28, 2005 at 6:42 PM #12
    .Hog

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    The eyeband thing is bad.
     
  13. Nov 28, 2005 at 7:08 PM #13
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    it is pretty good, nice job
     
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