Lov3hurTs 1st: 6/10(dont like hte border) 2nd: 6.2/10(text kills it and too much empty space) ext3rnal 1st: 6.5/10(looks alright) 2nd: 7.3/10(work on text)
Nice subzero sig. 8/10. Good balance of light and dark areas. 9/10 on the other one. I like how you filled up the right side with another render. Nice colours too.