This is my first render ever... Its pretty choppy, but hey ill get better Cred/Reps if deserved (prob not)
Nice cut out except some of the back ground is all the way arround the body and well its not my palce to critizsize i just started renderigna few days ago as well
It looks pretty good for a first, but it does look wanded. Next time try using the pen tool. If you are just starting out, Kazuya made a great tut that you can follow. Here's the tut. Hope this helps, keep trying.