I think it's cool. You should change the text of the quote "Two armies one goal" because it's too skinny. 7/10
Well, the bg kinda looks like clouds so try and add some stuff to that to make it look nicer. Add a color balance layer to it and that will make it look nicer. Try to blend your render in more and use a better pixel font for the quote with a 1 pix black stroke around it. Good job, keep trying.
6/10 Change the font on the quote and one other thing what is behind the elefant? is it a detail that u need to have? Other than that it is nice
That thing behind the elephant is a guy and a bunch of rocks flying through the air I like it man, 9/10
it's a nice sig name and quote text bit plain...the line trough the middle (for your name i suppose) is ok but maybe think about removing it evan