hay everyone i have this english essay for tomorow its about abortion anyways can you all give me comments and stuff, ^_^ Legalization of Abortion “It Is Murder” Abortion is the worst thing against human dignity. It is a crime against life. No living being has the right to kill a new living being. Many countries ban abortion and many institutions fight against it. Abortion is immoral and it should not be legalized. Abortion is a threat to a mother's health. A woman can suffer an infection or internal bleeding. She could also become sterilized, the permanent failure to bear a child. Abortion not only kills the baby but may kill the mother too. During an abortion, despite the use of local anesthesia, 97% of the women report severe pain, and if a more powerful drug is used she could suffer dangerous side effects. Many complications are common after an abortion, like irritation of the reproductive organs. As well, there is strong evidence that abortion increases the risk of breast cancer. Women that abort increase their chances of getting breast cancer by 50%, and teenagers with no previous pregnancies that abort after the 8th week increase their probability by 800%. 250,000 women die every year because of legal and illegal abortions: 75,000 of them die of self-inflicted abortions; 75,000 die of convulsions “the violent involuntary contraction of the muscles”; and the other 100,000 die of blood poisoning caused by an infection of the uterus. Therefore, if abortion is legalized there will be not only more fetal murders but also more mothers will die. Do people have the right to steal the life of a new living being? Killing a person is illegal, so why should a fetal murder be legal? You have to ask yourself these questions and realize that when a woman aborts, she is acting like any other murderer. Researchers have discovered that life begins at the moment of conception in the mother's uterus; therefore abortion ends a human life and should be punishable by law. As well, nine short months of pregnancy is a small cost for a life without physical and health problems, just you think about it.
Wow...soo....what the ---- are you saying? There are some things worse than death. Yes, she may be foolish, and be a women in poverty, and be a dumb---- and have sex and not use protection, and get pregnant, but really now- -would you want to live in a family where you're own mother can't support you, she has no real job, your father walked out, and you lived on green stamps and never had more than a meal a day, and with noone to help you, or, would you rather just die, instead of starving to death or being the daughter/son of a crack head, and living with a born addiction of it? No, I think not. What I find is that alot of Christian/Fundamentalists believe death is something to fear and be all afraid of, yet its something you have to accept, its a part of life, albiet the end. Oh, and this isnt an essay. This isnt even a page long ffs!
im pro abortion as long as there in there first stage of pregnancy beacuse you cant say ur against abortion untill ur a 16 year old pregnant girl and your parents will disown you if u have a kid so thats my opininon
I think your paper needs some work. Introduction has to be more developed. Your thesis lacks logical fact, therefore it is considered to be weak. So, in order to fix your intro, focus on one point, rather than jumping around. The intro should evoke some intrest, and yours fails to do so. You should have at least two body paragraphs. Your body is just the splurting of facts and does not stir up any emotion. Some of the things in your conclusion would be better placed in your introduction and the things in your introductio would be better in your conclusion.
Okay, your killing a baby, this baby was because you got drunk and did a guy named Bob who you met you on the side of a road and said "Sucky Sucky $5?" its their fault therefor I am against abortion.
He is asking for help on his essay but do what atakiBOON said he said what I was going to say. You need analysis of your evidence.
Dude he is not asking for your opinion on abortion he is asking for comments on his essay read waht I said ^^^.
Your essay structure is bad. it should be this: -intro -paragraph #1 (main body) -paragraph #2 (main body) -paragraph #3 (main body) -conclusion. you only have one paragraph for main body.
Also you need more body paragraphs you only have one but then again maybe that's what your suppose to do lol.
-Intro PP Hook | Thesis | Your 3 topics -Body PP -Body PP recognising the other side of the issue, showing you aren't one sided. dont make that PP stronger than your whole essay -Body PP to completely shatter that PP above. -Conclusion PP
