1st Render 1st Photoshop Used

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  1. Malkin

    Malkin Member

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    well lts my first render,and my first time using photoshop,1st forum post.its really choppy but here

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    Im not gonna ask for rep or creds because it sucks,i just want comments ;)
     
  2. Leprican

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    um the bow is very choppy but good otherwise
     
  3. Malkin

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    damn,just looking at that,it sucks,its my first render and first time using photoshop though,so be gentle
     
  4. Malkin

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    i think i picked the wrong pic to render for my first time,it didnt take me long,but maybe if i took longer it might of look better
     
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    It looks pretty easy......

    ....Makes Sense.....
     
  6. SocomPlayer123

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    Well it looks like you speent 5 seconds on it. you obiously cant do a worse job so, Go back and do it again!
     
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    Its very choppy and if you manage to cut it right, it will be an awesome render. Keep trying though.
     
  8. Rhaen

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    Renders should take a while m8. Take it slow and they will look amazing when you are done. I don't know what you use but I personally use the pen tool only and trace along the anti-aliased part of the pic that I am cutting. Easiest, but time cunsuming, for me to cut and my cuts are ok I would say.

    -Rhaen-
     
  9. BrokenFaith

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    Looks pretty good for first time i think, bow is very choppy and so is the bottom of the dude

    EDIT:: And part of the bow the wire in your render is a different color then the orginal cord, why?
     
  10. Fitz

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    1st tip to rendering - magic wand=the devil

    2nd tip to rendering - pen tool=not the devil

    lesson learned?
     
  11. BrokenFaith

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    I use the pen tool, a good render with pen tool is around like 1000 anchor points i heard... my render (my second one in renders) has like 1120 or so im guessing
     
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    looks real choppy... if u took little more time would have looked pretty good.
     
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    rofl u missed alot of things....good ebough for a 1st render but amazing how u miss alot of things 0,.o
     
  14. SocomPlayer123

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    because he messed up and thought by adding white it would make it look like normal.
     
  15. +mw.Kat~AV

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    my tip for this is
    don't rush if you don't have the time to complete it then put it off for a time when you do.
    second tip is zoom in nice and close at about 500 i would say
    it is choppy but good on you for trying
    and don't give up try again
    :)
     

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