It's really choppy and I can see several areas where either the magic wand took out some parts (or you did, inexplicably). Could you post the original picture though cause it looks cool. Good first effort. Also, don't post Jpegs with white backgrounds, choose a really contrasting colour (in this render maybe bright red). THat, or save it as a .png.
Loved the pic so had a go myself!! Don't want to step on anybodies toes, just wanted to use the pic!!
Second one is the best no offence. And the first one is way to choppy. But good job anyway At least you are providing us with something to use
Wow stop making renders if you dont save them as pngs otherwise there useless what the **** is hard about that bunch of nubber butters.
NO ONE LISTEN TO _N3M3SS_ his a dumbass NOOB. renders are alittle choppy but other then that there nice