Tech Template.. **updated**

started working on this one this morning since i woke up early and had nothing to do.. (early for me is probably late for u lol) and then i worked on it alittle bit more tonight and wanted to show it off to get some comments to help make improve on my template making.

this is only my 2nd lighter templates for some reason i have alot of trouble with lighter templates.


tell me what u think of some of the tech brushes used in some parts of the design.. im not sure if it would look better with or with out all of just some of them.

also hoping to maybe sell this one because i have no use for it. and that render can be changed i just put it in there cause i thought it went good with the design.

edit: **version2**


anyone have any idea on how much i could sell this for? right now there isnt any flash but how much do u think i could sell it for with flash and without flash?

 

Wow..thats awesome dude..
Gotta think of something to say..
ok...how bout this..

in between the text on the nav bar make spacers...like the ones above and below the News text just smaller.

 

bg won't tile.

render doesnt work well.

and the nav is confusing (placement)

 

@ DiabloDj1 thanks man i will try that.

@ Sleepy-uk first of bg will tile i made it so that it would it is tiling in that image right there u just dont notice.. i made it into a small pattern so it should work fine. and about the nav i know right side is kinda weird i was thinking that but i think it looks ok but do u think it would be better if i fliped evrerything around so that the nav is on the left side?

 

looks cool.... but wouldnt work as a template

 

why wouldnt it work as a template?

 

looks good, i like those grey pipes

 

why wouldnt it work as a template? [/b][/quote]
the background...

it wont tile as someone else siad, meaning it will have seams and repeat, just look bad.

needs to be a pattern or a solid color dude.

blocks off the stroke metal look with a nice lookin border and a low opacity pattern overlay as the background will look nice, make em like 30x30 blocks.

hope that helps.

anyway, the design itself is nice, the only function flaw I see is the background, the design itself is fine. The only thing I dont like is the header, which needs to be replaced with something more interesting.

 

Looks nice..but it still needs some work...

 

nice i like it alot

 

very nice site, i think there are points to better, but they are already mentioned besides that it looks like you can find it out youself

 

updated the first post with the newest version!!! please comment on it!



how much do you think this will sell for?

 

Text/banner is to plain.

Bad nav bar placement.

Pipes are oversaturated, and look fake.

Some of the content boxes aren't smoothed out.

Space out the links in your nav bar.

 

thank ill think about that. anymore comments? please

 

Tbh .. I don't see the faults which a few other people have obviously noticed ....

I think it's a great template dude, keep it up !!

Umm .. as for how much it would sell for ...

If you added flash - $20
Without Flash - $10

That's my guess from looking at it ....

Nice temp !