Fav+ Love Poems

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  1. Faken

    Faken Well-Known Member

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    Post all your fav poems here i will haha :)

    i got this idea when my lil cuzen post one of hes poems in the showoff room!!!

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    ok heres one to start you off

    Teardrops
    Each one that falls
    Holds precious memories
    That I will for-ever recall
    Just remember when you see a teardrop
    That flows so freely down a cheek
    I hope at that moment
    You'll think of me
    Teardrops...

    By : Ann *Stareyes*

    plz mate SURE to have by who

    Thanks
     
  2. Carmon

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    Nice Poem really cuts to the persons feelings
     
  3. KraZe

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    Without You

    Without you….
    My head is spinning so much
    Sitting here, hoping for another touch
    Though it may be hard to bare
    All that beauty and no one to care

    But I'm different, I promise to be there
    Through thick and thin, I'll be here
    I want you to be there, my Queen
    And nothing in between

    Without you….
    Life cannot be complete
    No other girl could compete
    You're the one for me
    Without you, I cannot be

    11.28.03


    I wrote this back in 03 when I was into poetry and not photoshop :) Any comments?
     
  4. Faken

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    kool :'( thats good man
     
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    Logicaly Senior Member

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    The artist is me, my first ever published piece.

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    im gonna make one up on the spot

    Just in case...

    I see you there waiting
    i wanna tell you
    but you look hurried
    i know you through and through

    I see you there standing
    i wanna tell you
    but you look tired
    im feeling so blue

    I see you there talking
    I wanna tell you
    but you look busy
    You dont have a clue

    I see you there smiling
    I wanna tell you
    But you look so happy
    what should i do

    I see you there crying
    I wanna tell you
    but you look so sad
    It would be studip to do..

    Just in case u didnt know
    I wanna tell you
    But i cant..
    I love you


    turned out in a stalker poem lol :P
    (made a few lil changes)
     
  7. Faken

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    haha nice work guys
     
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    I write poetry in my spare times I suck though its just mostly my random babblings put on paper and it happens to rhyme....
     
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    i like that poem by robert frost about the 2 roads
     
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    when i was depressed i used to write poems, but they were about hate and stuff like that. they sucked anyway, i dont do it anymore. im not the type of person to get depressed now :D
     
  11. A NERD1989

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    meh. i dont know any good ones
     
  12. KiwiFlavor

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    hmm idk if u count this as a poem =/ but anyway i made this xD

    heh, i guess i wont get the girl i love the most ! im just too shy to pour my heart out. why am i so shy? i dont know. probably it's the heaven i see in your eyes. can't really think of sweet words. let me be alone in my lonely world. love is beautiful yet, painful.

    i really hope there was a hope out there for me. I hope there was a miracle that could melt down your frozen heart.
    will you be willing to know me first?
    my life without seeing you, is like a night without stars.

    no wonder i keep thinking about her, no wonder i keep waiting for her ! what am i feeling? is there a love that cant be described with words? and what's the point of life, if i cant be with the girl i dream?

    too much of this. let me be frozen in my meaningless words. Wind, can you tell her that i love her? im dying out inside. my mind is empty...only her there and no one else.

    sigh..... late... it's too late! i have to let it go ! even tho it is hurting me.... probably this is the best way...







    and again idk if it's a poem :P
     
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    aKa TheProphet Well-Known Member

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    Wow this is great stuff for my girlfreind! Thanks guys.
     
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    There's another one, man I used to be a depressed monkey, now I'm just a super optimistic, which, at times, is worse than being depressed.

    The one actually got me 3 awards and it was put into 5 books.. Ofcoarse I had to pay to get them put in there, but I used to get calls from people looking me up online saying it touched them.. ^_^
     
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    wth?? lol !! :rofl:


    just dont tell her u made these up ! xD
     

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