New C4d Creation

I am new to C4D so I used a tut to make this render, then just snazzed it up in PS. I think it is too blended, but eh what do you guys think?

 

hard to see anything.

 

either the render is too bright or the background is too bright


you gotta do something so we can at least see it

 

^^^^i agrree but it looks cool

 

Yep, can barely see it.

 

i can barly see it, but what i can see. it looks cool. 7/10

 

darken the bg...but from what i can make out of the render .. it looks great