My Comp. 1 Paper

nice work, i wish you can do my project for me lol

 

You spelt 'spelt' wrong.

 

Oh sh*t, we're not supposed to put anything in first person..

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^Lol, you have some work to do then, when is your paper due?

 

She [composition teacher] hasn't really finalized a due-date yet, but since this is the rough draft anyway, i guess it's not a problem. But even so, the only stuff that's really in first person are a few things towards the end, where i'm venting. lol.

edit- and i should probably cut back on the pronouns, too.

Oh, and i'm not communist, but liberal democrat; there's a gigantic difference.

 

My teachers gave me the tip of talking third person about yourself when you want first person stuff.

"The author of this paper...". It might not sound very good though.

Nice paper man! I agree with your political position >_>.

 

ncie essay you definately got some skils when it comes to writing...

 

Thanks for the comments.

Changed the topic title, since this really isn't an essay by nature, but more of a paper.

 

hahaha keep up the good work good use of words too