I think you need to practice more dude, not trying to sound mean. Just so you could improve and attract more attention to your work.
yea likewise, but its your thread so ill leave it to your decision, and yea ppl mite b a lil more interestsed
20 minutes.. im guessing you think thats alot? sorry but u should make it 5 starting price or something.. jsut needs some more color and work on the text then it would be good