it isnt bad for a 4th render, i dont like the blurring effect u put surrounding the render, for me that just decreases the quality, since its a halo render im sure it has been done before, i personly havent seen it before, still i wouldnt use it, seeing as i dont play the xbox nor do i play halo, but from a render stand point its not bad for one of ur first renders
meh im working on a halo render but idk how to soften up the edges and i dont have photoshop but looks awsome