Thats some nice text you have going on in the first edition. try adding a tag line along with the main text.
Add some of that blue into the render to tie it together better.
The type is good on the first one. But is that two renders on the last or one? If its two I dont get the correlation between them.
They pretty much all look the same with different renders. Try different color combinations along with different amounts of contrast.
Good work....
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You lose some of your depth by blurring too much of the render. The left side fades into it, which makes bring the bg up instead of making it look...
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