Bascially what everyone else stated, sharpen the render and tone down the blur. Also have some lighting on the right of her face as opposed to...
The main thing that needs work is the BG. It really does not suit the render at all. If you do want to keep the BG I would suggest removing the...
Defintely the colored one. Looks good, but the blending could be worked on a bit more. The text is also kinda hard on the eyes. Overall: 7/10.
The second one look better. Great effects all around for this one. Like the above poster said bad lighting on the sasuke sig, but good job on the...
Looks good, though I would suggest working on blending his right arm into the BG more. Especially around his sleeve, it looks badly cut there.
For me 13 is the youngest, anything below is just a bit weird for me (I'm 17 by the way). Anyways age shouldn't really matter for you if you...
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