The text doesn't fit well. Also, it seems very messy and the effects are random. There's no focal point; what do you want us as viewers to looks...
Maybe you could bring his face out a little more or make it a little more noticeable?
I don't feel like there's any flow. I didn't know Al was in there at first, either. Maybe the sharp tool could be used on him and the blur tool in...
I'm not good on text, but I think it looks all right. I feel like the lighting is a little off and is bringing attention away from the render,...
bump
[IMG] Please C&C.
The second one doesn't work.
Great tags as always; love the Magneto one.
[IMG] Made it for someone on another board.
[IMG] [IMG] Not feeling this one.
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