Megan Fox

First time doing a signature on a person so i fort best pick was Megan Fox what do you think?
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It looks like awesome effects. I can read your text effect.

 

like the blending of the render to the b/g and "megan fox" text flows nicely with the rest of the tag. Only thing i think takes away from it is the "created by nipples" text. Remove that and its a pretty solid effort. gj.

 

Quite a nice outcome and might just be me but I dont think the text is clear enough on 'Megan Fox'

 

Thanks for comments i have updated tell me what you think im still learning as i only started learning on the weekend so any pointers will be great

 

I like the atmosphere and the color scheme; it matches the render well.
The text (as the others pointed out) may need a few more tweaks. Experiment with more readable typefaces.
The focal can also use some sharpening. It looks kinda blurry from my perspective (but maybe that's just me?).

Still, good job. Kai.

 

now that you mention it, the focal could use more sharpening, I also just noticed the border which I don't like. 1px black or no border is normally my preference

 

I like it man you got some good things goin on. I would say just blend Fox into the background a little better. You can put some of the effects you have in the background on a layer above her on different blending modes. I'd either rework or remove the text. Script fonts rarely work in signatures.