Two tags after a long hiatus

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  1. Dior

    Dior -1xx,x00 credits.

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    Back from the dead in lack of better things to do, really. Haven't touched Photoshop in years. Doubtful anyone'll post in this thread anyway but what the heck. Hi again.

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    Edit: Here's a third one, also posted below.

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  2. MagicXB

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    Ooh, I like both of them! I think I like the second one more because of the blend of effects with the focal point of the render, but the first one gives me a kind of hypnotized vibe.
     
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    Thank you. Yeah, the above was the first one I made out of the two, not as happy with it as the second one.

    Here's another one I started working on. Wanted something simple/minimalistic with easy colours. Don't know if it can be considered finished but I sorta like it:

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    That one is definitely pretty minimalistic to me in style. I feel like it may be missing a little extra flare though.
     
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    I added an extra shape in order to fill the empty void on the right, and to give it a little more "flow" to the side if you will.

    Two different versions:

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    Thoughts?
     
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    Might be doing stuff too simple, but at least it's keeping me occupied. I should really be studying, though.
     
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    I like that one!

    And studying might be a tad overrated. XD (I can say that now that I graduated from college a year ago though, lol)
     
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    Psvertjuh NotYourMonkeyNotYourRobot

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    First one is best imo, mainly because of the colors, few points I would look at;
    The lightning is exactly on top right now, but if you look at the focal you can see he has shadows at the right side, which means the lighning should be a tad more to the left. Lastly I wouldnt blend in the focal at the left side, I think it would be better for the compo if the left side was on top of the bg

    From your sprite tags I think the first one is bit empty, could use some more white shapes I think. Second one is better, though really tiny ^^

    Lastly I would be careful with adding text, it can really easy mess up your tag (Ive done the same thing soooo many times xD). If it doesnt adds anything to the flow, compo or overall look; leave it off :3

    Hope you can do something with this cnc, for your first tags theyre absolutely great, way better then my 'back from the dead' tag ^^

    Kiu!
     

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