I honestly think its poop. Text does not fit, quality is utter useless. Render dimensions are useless as well >_<
You really need to work on your critique skills, how is anyone going to want to pursue creating artwork if you come at them like that. I think your comment is harsh..and calling what they did is useless thus calling the individual useless. Try to give them pointers on how they can improve. There is a saying you have nothing nice to say don't say anything..
I think it has a lot of potential, perhaps change the text but I kinda like the cob webs, but I'm not sure if they fit right there. Also the border is a bit off putting, I suggest just a black bar on top and bottom if you do want a border. Other than that Looks good man and keep at it!