First sig in years... Wow

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Nixon., Dec 31, 2012.

  1. Nixon.

    Nixon. Well-Known Member

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    First sigs in years... Wow

    Alright so be as critical as possible, by all means, and how may i change things up?

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    Darker gradient
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    stock render is a photo by Dana Ng

    Kanye

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    pixels fixed, no black thing behind scarf
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    Textless
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    a little too bright for me, lot's of the details get lost in al the light
     
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    VegetaGirl Mistress Renderer

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    I agree you should use a darker gradient map to take off the glare.
     
  4. Nixon.

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    hopefully thats better?
     
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    Much better..you took off some of the glare and can see more of the focal..and alyas try to put your text next to the focal so people don't have to look at two separate images..
     
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    In my opinion the darker gradient is still to bright. Maybe make it even more dark? But it looks nice already!

    And as vegetagirl said, your text is very far from your focal point. which would be the render.
     
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    Definitely is too bright there even with the gradient.
    try a black fill layer set to overlay or soft light
     

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