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Old 01-03-2009, 06:57 PM   #1
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A bit strange isn't it?

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Newest version
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Old 01-03-2009, 07:11 PM   #2
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Well it's not bad, it just is a bit chaotic. I think the thing that throws me off the most is the left side of the picture where you've placed the text. It really throws the flow off. The concept is great, just work on that flow a bit, so it looks a bit more cohesive.
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Old 01-03-2009, 08:08 PM   #3
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So should i just leave out the text? =/

Cause placing it in other places doesnt really do any good x.x
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Old 01-03-2009, 09:42 PM   #4
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No text + less brightness next to eddeh and it would be better imo
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Old 01-04-2009, 12:00 AM   #5
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Its a bit different, Its good that you have your own stlye.. but im not feelin it
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Old 01-04-2009, 12:11 AM   #6
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I like the 1st one with the sprinkles. Nice work!
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Old 01-04-2009, 05:01 AM   #7
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Kay thanks for the comments everyone.

Added a new Version :o
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Old 01-04-2009, 08:39 AM   #8
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Dont rly see a vocal and flow, dont rly like it
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Old 01-04-2009, 08:44 AM   #9
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Hmm...I think you need to improve on the flow, and try to blend the render a bit mroe into the bg.
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So how do i improve the flow? o-O;
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Old 01-04-2009, 08:58 AM   #11
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The liquified part on the left, and also the sticking out liquified part on the right can be removed.
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