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Old 06-21-2008, 01:38 PM   #1
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I think its one of my best, for sure!
I didn't use any tuts, whatso-ever.
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C&C??
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Old 06-21-2008, 01:52 PM   #2
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text is bad tbh, might want to get rid of that
overall it doesn't look bad, it has some flow, a little bit of depth (you might want to work on that)
but the main thing that i notice is that the render looks distorted... did you transform it?
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Old 06-21-2008, 01:54 PM   #3
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I only made it smaller, and i sharpened the thing, but erased parts of the body of spidey, maybe thats the problem..
and the text i agree, but i hate text.
On an other forum, they always Nag about the text.
i'll make an new version

I now see what u ment with the distorted.. i put an splatter over spidey and did an clipping mask, will edit that to in next version

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Old 06-21-2008, 02:35 PM   #4
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the left side looks kinda repetitive and the colors on the background don't really go with spiderman..

you should blend spiderman a little more because it sticks out too much right now compared to everything else and try adding some red on the background. perhaps it'll make it look better
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