This one is meh... spent about 30 minutes on it. Lighting is very bad here lo, but I put it in early on so I don't think I'll be able to change it. Though I do like how the text came out even if it is bad.
as you said the lighting is bad, and the text doesnt fit in with the rest of the tag. try a photofilter on cyan and blurring the people at the sides. maybe some clipping masks would help clean it up a bit.