Playboy Tag ;)

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by _Soul Child_, Mar 29, 2008.

  1. Mar 29, 2008 at 11:41 PM #1
    _Soul Child_

    _Soul Child_ Well-Known Member

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    Ha! Now that I got your attention.............................

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    cnc!!!
     
  2. Mar 30, 2008 at 9:59 AM #2
    Strykor

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    There is too much I think, it looks messy.
    Try to point out the focal point a bit more.
     
  3. Mar 31, 2008 at 12:41 AM #3
    DarthSomething

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    Really messy hun. Needs more flow and a cleaner feel. It's really not workin' for me. The focal and depth for sure need work. Keep up the work, and read some tutorials when you have the time. You'll improve. :)
     
  4. Mar 31, 2008 at 2:19 AM #4
    MDproskater

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    Very messy like they said, but has a lot of potential.
     
  5. Mar 31, 2008 at 2:34 AM #5
    solarum123

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    no playboy? =(

    too messy. and kill the text.
     
  6. Mar 31, 2008 at 3:58 AM #6
    Kiyaa

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    as the others have said, and sharpen up the focal.

    Nice start :)
     

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