Halo

[Pasta is Pasta]

It's a really bad render.. I know. And it's my 3rd sig and 1st with c4d.

CnC please :tongue: .

[J-G]

its o.k dont rly like the text nor the back needs more 2 it IMO

[.Zeldafan]

Text is terrible. C4d is bad, a bad color, and from the looks of it, a bad c4d. Next time make the render smaller, and a tad closer to the middle, but usually not right in the middle.
Try blending in the render some.

[Pasta is Pasta]

lol ok guys i really couldnt edit it for some reason yesterday, but now i can. does anyone know any good fonts because i cant find and good ones.....

ty.

[rbo]

you have to work on the composition blending and effects on this one

[WrightY]

its o.k dont rly like the text nor the back needs more 2 it IMO[/b]

Text is terrible. C4d is bad, a bad color, and from the looks of it, a bad c4d. Next time make the render smaller, and a tad closer to the middle, but usually not right in the middle. Try blending in the render some.[/b]

jesus its his third sig. which means hes new so ease up yeah?
i really like this one. the bg suits halo because its kinda spacey. the effects in the bg are interesting. text could be improved, but awesome job bro. i suggest checking out the tutorial forum for some usefull tips. keep it goin man

[ZeroSmith]

JL's a real tough critic, =P He does give alot of usefull information, just in a harsher-manner.

[Puree]

lol ok guys i really couldnt edit it for some reason yesterday, but now i can. does anyone know any good fonts because i cant find and good ones..... ty.[/b]

www.dafont.com