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Old 11-22-2007, 10:02 PM   #1
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Here's my latest!
I like it, but some things didn't go as planned. Oh well, it still turned out pretty good imo. ^_^




CnC plz. ^_^
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Old 11-22-2007, 11:15 PM   #2
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she seems a lil sharp( i really notice it on the single srand of hair that jumps over a pixel xD) but everything else is like sex, awesome
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Old 11-22-2007, 11:15 PM   #3
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liken the text
bit mono tho'
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Old 11-22-2007, 11:17 PM   #4
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I really like the effects and text, but it's a tad monotone in places.
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Old 11-23-2007, 10:45 AM   #5
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text is really nice, but work on depth and lighting
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Old 11-23-2007, 03:56 PM   #6
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I like the flow and c4d placement. I do think it could use a few accents of another color or 2 though.

The text looks good as well.
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Old 11-23-2007, 04:00 PM   #7
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I love the use of the pink rectangles next to the text, verrry nice. CD4s fit, but yeah, she is a tad sharp.
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Old 11-23-2007, 04:04 PM   #8
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Focal is way too jaggy, lay of the sharpen ;P

Nice colors here though
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Old 11-24-2007, 07:00 AM   #9
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Ahhh,
yeah, I know she's sharp.
Was a resize problem though, not
over sharpen. -_-

Really appreciate the comments guys.

Yeah,
Mono-tono-ohno.

I'll work on coloring. ^_^
Lighting was a big-fat-turd on this one as well.
I couldn't do it. lol

Thanks all.
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Old 11-24-2007, 07:17 AM   #10
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its the sharpness that puts it off imo
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Old 11-24-2007, 08:11 AM   #11
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little sharp on the render
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Old 11-24-2007, 09:41 AM   #12
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Nice colors but i can't help but feel something is missing
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Old 11-24-2007, 10:41 AM   #13
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COMPO.

i can't believe no-one said anythign about compo.

more than anything else, the really boring center placement of the render is hurting you.

text is great, a little blur on the sides and some judicious dodge/burn would really help.
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Old 11-24-2007, 10:43 AM   #14
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i like the colours however i dont think the renders the best it looks a bit dull and jus way to white for sum reason and the c4ds placed i dont think they work. I guess u can try darken the render a lil maybe.
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Old 11-24-2007, 11:02 AM   #15
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I think it's awesome. Great job.
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