I think its not bad, but too plain for me and i cant really read the text, plus i think if you change the color of the border the background will stand out better.
I was thinking the same thing, but I can't come up with ideas to make it less plain (A) Though most people I asked disagree, I really like this render, and I like the idea of making a tranquil and calm signature, but im unable to do that without making it look plain. Ill think about the border
Yup, The focul's a little odd too, cause it's all got that motion blur effect and it kind of leaves your eyes wandering. But the render placement's not bad. Keep up them tuts.
I believe you did a great job on thel lighting . I also really like what you did with the render itself. Altho' you could make the focal a little more visible. (If there is one already lol.) Nice.
not bad maybe u need to sharpen the dude coz there no flow or create sum closer to it...dont look to bad so just work on that.