You really like the big face in the background don't ya? This looks so much better man. Great job. I would say to try one without the bigger version of the render in the background and maybe adding some c4d into the bg and work a bit on depth. I know you are knew to this and you are progressing very nicely! Keep at it man and you will be so much better!
Usually by your 7th go you stop telling people. Also, try to get out of the Face-Filter-Filter-Filter-Render grind. Try doing some tutorials and learn some more advanced/aesthetically pleasing methods of creating a background.
YA i know im not sure why i said it was my 7th and ya i know i just wanted to do the things i know first then get good with them then move on to big and better things... but thks for ur comment...
