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Old 10-28-2007, 03:07 AM   #1
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Here's a military stock I did.
I'm not very good at military stuff, so I'm trying
to work that wrinkle out.




v2



CnC plz :wub:

How's V2 look?
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Old 10-28-2007, 04:03 AM   #2
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has some potential. if you make the bg darker, the neon stripes would stand out more and do more justice
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Old 10-28-2007, 04:53 AM   #3
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if u had a difrent bg like a dark 1 the neon will look better
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Old 10-28-2007, 09:52 AM   #4
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bad choice of colors around the arm imo
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Old 10-28-2007, 10:16 AM   #5
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Thanks guys.
I might try that.
But, I might not cause I like it how it is.

Thanks,
anymore?

g2g to bed or I'd CnC some more stuff.

I'll check back tommarow.

peace
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Old 10-28-2007, 03:32 PM   #6
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yea darker Bg would be better
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Old 10-28-2007, 04:56 PM   #7
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I'd say possibly go b/w on this one, because the colors are kind of all over the map. Other than that, I like it, the depth, the flow, the text, all spot on. The stock looks a little low quality as well. Good stuff though.
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Old 10-28-2007, 05:04 PM   #8
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Yea i like the idea a lot but i am just not feeling the fow of the neons with a ------ stock background just a bit blurred but it would nice with a little darker background
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The colors are way messy here and so is the overall look, if you want to have lots of colors, you gotta blend them
Also no flow is established

Not the best from you, keep at it though
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The colors, like all the others said, are all over the place. Not the best from you imo.
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Old 10-30-2007, 02:51 AM   #11
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Ok,
I like the B&W idea.
Might try it.

I fail to see how there's no flow though. :blink:

And yeah,
Stock was a little LQ. Hard to find nice military
stocks. :mellow:
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