There's a lot of things that could be improved upon, but text is the thing that sticks out to me as being the biggest problem... it's bordering on plain horrible.... no offense, of course.
floating head syndrome i thinkw e have here, nice tag though, very empty however, good work on text i like
I like the effects, but not the colors xD Nor the text.. It's very plain, but I think that was your intention, so good tag nonetheless