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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Rey, Nov 15, 2007.

  1. .Rey

    .Rey Well-Known Member

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    I just did some experimenting and got this. What do you guys think?

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    Here is version 2:

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    *Changes with version 2*

    • Changed Text
    • Blended render left side


    V3

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    **changes**

    • painted near top of head to blend more
     
  2. Dior

    Dior -1xx,x00 credits.

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    I like the background effects you got going, but the render and text
    just seems too misplaced to me it's unbearable. :( I'd try to blend the
    render abit more to the left and down, and removing the text and
    the block it's sitting on completely. Other than that, I kind of like the
    lightning you made in the left upper corner! :D
     
  3. .Rey

    .Rey Well-Known Member

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    I added some changes to and I posted version 2.

    I smudged the left side of the render to blend it in more.
    I changed the text to better fit the sig.
     
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    I like it all, just might need minor blending touches, but overall well done
     
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    what would you suggest for blending it in?
     
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    Try brushing a little on top of the render, just a bit to blend it. That may help. ;)
     
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    Here is v3


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    Try some around the bottom of him too, maybe.
     
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    not a fan of the bg, and the text looks really bad, unsquish it
     
  10. Dior

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    Version 3 is way better than the others, but make some of that effects
    at the bottom of the render and infront of it to give it a bit more depth. :)
     
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    Theres something about the render that ruins the entire sig :/
    V3 is the best
     
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    Like I said...It was just an experiment.

    And too Dior, Ill add another c4d to add a little blending at the bottom.
     
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    v2 almost looks like v3 but very hot
     
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    Blend the render a bit more, and make the text more readable. Pretty nice attempt though.
     

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