It's too bright. And way to contrasted. Just tone those down a bit and it will be good. Also get rid of the text or work on it harder.
Over contrasted. :/ It's nice. The empty space on the <-- --> outsides bugs me a bit personally. I would try to put a little more there. Text placement should be different too. And try giving a little sharpening to the focal point and a light light sharpen to the effects near the focal.